This month, we’re ringing in Spring with the Spring Fling Writing Contest! Pick a gif, write a Spring-story, keep it under 150 words. Easy, right?
Uh… no…
But definitely fun and a great way to welcome Spring! (There’s still time to enter if you can write fast–deadline is April 19 at 11:59pm CST!)
So, without further ado, here is my Spring Fling story (135 words):
Animal At The Zoo
First day of Spring.
Trip to the zoo!
Oh no—line too long!
Perch like a flamingo,
Wait like an alligator,
Until tickets bought.
Through the gate.
Hop like a kangaroo,
Parade like an elephant,
Greeting the animals.
Little brother’s cranky.
Squawk like a parrot,
Spit like a camel,
Time for lunch.
Spread out the picnic.
Gobble like a turkey,
Eat like a warthog,
Sandwiches gone.
Can we play?
Swing like a monkey,
Slide like a penguin,
Until…
Rain!
Splash like a duck,
Giggle like a hyena,
Spring rainstorm gone.
Afternoon sillies.
Sneak like a jaguar,
Roll like a panda,
Hide like an ostrich.
LOST!
Found.
Hug like a bear,
Squeeze like a boa constrictor,
It’s okay Mom.
Stretch like a giraffe,
Yawn like a lion,
Sleep like a sloth,
Until the next Spring Day.
Love how you attributed all the actions and moods to animals the children see at the zoo. Very clever! Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks! We had our first Spring zoo trip last weekend – it’s one of the best parts of Spring!
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Really fun and different. Each action went along with its zoo counterpart. So clever. Super cute gif to boot. Good luck!
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Thanks!
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Oh my goodness, I love this so much! I take my kids to the zoo all the time, and I could visualize every aspect of your story. The way you seamlessly wove together zoo animals with the child’s experience was brilliant. Great job!
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Thanks – it was loads of fun to write!
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I can see this as a picture book about going to the zoo. Very interactive and fun.
I bet the zoo is very busy on a warm spring day
Good luck.
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Thanks. It was a fun day last weekend – this weekend is a little chilly (although I bet the animals are having fun in the cooler weather)
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I could see children acting this out! What fun that would be. Good job!
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What a great idea! So many fun visuals at the zoo.
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We just went to the zoo this weekend! I love how your story captures that excitement!
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Thanks! My kids sure love animals!
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So clever! And you totally make it work. (It could feel forced, but it doesn’t!) Well done!
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Thanks! This was such a fun contest – everyone was so creative and found completely different gifs!
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Well done! I love zoo’s and so does my grandchild. I can see this as a PB. The illustrator would have fun with this.
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Aww… thanks!
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This is such a clever, relatable, and interactive story for children and adults alike Who could resist imitating some of those delightful animal actions? Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks! It was super fun to write! Good luck to you too!
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Fun story! Sounds a lot like our trips to the zoo!
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Ours too – but with less fighting! 🤣
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Oh my goodness, you had me rolling around laughing! My husband is sleeping next to me and I almost woke him up! What I found the most amazing is everytime that I thought yup that’s my favorite part another one came about! Thank you so much for sharing this hilarious story!❤️
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Oh, you’re so sweet! You just made my day!
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Who doesn’t love the zoo? Great job! What a fun story!
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Thanks! We LOVE the zoo! Also, thanks for putting together such a fun writing event!
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This would make such a delightful picture book! I love all of the animal actions as the day unfolds. I would have loved to share this story with my kids when they were little and we visited the zoo–it would’ve been fun to re-enact all of the movements. And your GIF had me laughing before I even started reading. Good luck!
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